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November 10, 2012
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Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D3100
Shutter Speed
10/250 second
Aperture
F/3.8
Focal Length
20 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Nov 11, 2012, 1:54:47 AM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows
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I will never grow up by PeachyTwist I will never grow up by PeachyTwist
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Us lecturers, we just have to critique all the time!!

You’ve photographed yourself from a very close proximity to the camera, which means you’ve had to use a wide angle lens setting (20mm). This tends to make some features of the face stand out – such as your nose. You’ll find that a longer focal length, say 70mm, will lead to a much more flattering view. (yes, if people think you’re pretty in this shot, just wait ‘till you make this change!).

The aperture is small at f3.8, which helps to remove you from the background, but this will defocus other facial features because you’re so close to the camera. The lighting is good, with no nasty shadows, highlights or washed out detail.


You’ve got your eyes in focus, which is the most important thing in a portrait. I like the hair failing over your eye – helps to stop the picture looking too symmetrical. The large pupils in your eyes have caught some nice reflections. Nothing in the background is overly distracting.

A nice informal portrait – well done.
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:iconlcneko-tan:
LCNeko-tan Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're so cute and pretty!! :D
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:iconpeachytwist:
PeachyTwist Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Student General Artist
; ~ ; thank you i'm flattered
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:iconlcneko-tan:
LCNeko-tan Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most certainly welcome, hun~! :hug:
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Celem Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Growing up is overrated...
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:iconpeachytwist:
PeachyTwist Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student General Artist
it is!
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Aenea-Jones Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
What a sweet face :heart:
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PeachyTwist Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student General Artist
thank you..
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JIMENOPOLIX Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You look cute! :aww:
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PeachyTwist Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student General Artist
thanks ^^
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JIMENOPOLIX Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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